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PostSubject: Another Part of Me   Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:40 pm

I've read some fanfics and I decided I want to try to write my own fanfic.
So, here it goes. I hope you guys like it.


Another Part of Me

Chapter One
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There she was. All alone, walking through the crouded streets of London. She didn't mind being alone. In fact, she was there because she wanted to be alone.
Annie was a 16 year old girl, with long brown hair and brown eyes. She was portuguese and it was the first time she spent her vacation away from her family. This was all she wanted. Three weeks away from everything! Her family was driving her crazy and she needed to get some fresh hair and freedom in her life.

She passed by a music store. She loved music, so she entered the store. They were playing 'Smooth Criminal', one of her favourite songs. She had left all of her money in the hotel room, because she knew she would spend it all as soon as she could, so, she was just looking around. Annie was almost leaving the music store when she saw it. A big poster on the wall announcing Michael Jackson's new album and a show. And guess what? The show was in London! One week from there! Annie almost couldn't believe. For the first time she was going to have a chance to see him live!

She had turned a 'Michael Jackson Fan' when she was 14. She had dreamed with that moment so many times... And now, her dream was about to come true! She had to run if she wanted to get a good place, near the stage!

She run to her hotel room, grabbed her money and back in the streets! She looked for the store where they were selling the tickets and waited for two and a half hours to be able to talk with the seller.

- Good afternoon Miss. Can I help you?
- Good afternoon. I wanted a ticket for the Michael Jackson show, please.
- Just a second please. I'm sorry, but I'm afraid it's already sold out.
Annie felt tears in her eyes. She wanted to say something to the man but her voice didn't came out.
- Are you ok Miss? - The man asked.
- Hmmm... No... - Annie felt a small tear roll down her cheek.
- I'm really sorry Miss. There's nothing I can do.
- Ok. Thanks anyway.

On her way back to the hotel, Annie couldn't stop the tears from falling. How could this happen to her? She was almost there... So close!
Suddenly, a raindrop fell from the sky. And another. And it started rainning.
- Great... - She said - I see this is my lucky day...


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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:41 pm

Another Part of Me

Chapter Two
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Annie had entered in a bar. She was completely wet but she was so sad that she didn't even noticed it. She was waiting for an orange juice that was taking too long to come. Annie was getting nervous. There was a strange guy in the far corner of that room. His face was hidden in the shadow of the black hat he had on. But Annie had that weird feeling that he was looking to her.
She drunk her orange juice as fast as she could. She asked for the bill and paid and she left that place. The rain had stopped, but there were only a few people in the streets. Strange...
She had walked for about two minutes, when she looked back. The man from the bar was following her! For a moment, she could see his face. His hair was black. His skin was white, like a ghost. He had red eyes, like Satan. He was wearing black clothes. It was scary...
Annie was really scared now. She started to walk faster. Annie looked back again and the man was getting closer. She started to run, but she didn't knew that city. She was lost!
She turned to her right, but she regreted it since that precise moment. It was a strange, dark alley. Annie tryed to hide in the shadows.
She was crying sillently when she heard footsteps. That guy was about to find her! She closed her eyes when she saw his shadow.
Suddenly, the footsteps stoped. And then she felt her arm being pulled and her head hit the wall behind her. The man punched her face and she felt the warm blood running down her face. She felt like if she was going to faint. There was so much pain!
She tryed to defend herself screaming for help, punching and kicking the guy but her strength was vanishing.
She heard a car stop...People screaming...She saw two dark figures taking the man away from her. Annie felt herself falling. She didn't had any strength left.
Then she saw two beautiful eyes looking at her. She felt in peace when she saw them.
And then...It all went black.


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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:49 pm

Another Part of Me

Chapter Three
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Annie tryed to open her eyes but the sunlight hurt them. She tryed to turn around but she barely could move. All of her body was hurting her. She stood like that for a couple of minutes and tryed to remember what happened. Where was she?
She finally opened her eyes and lookd around. It was a small room with white walls and a window with a balcony.
In spite of being full of pain, Annie turned around in her bed. She realized she wasn't alone. There was someone, sitting on the floor, near her bed. His head was resting on the bed, his face hidden by his harms. The man had long dark hair. She didn't knew him, so she got scared. When she tryed to get away from him he woke up.
When she saw his face, Annie's heart failled a beat. His skin was white, like snow, but very beautiful. His eyes were dark but they looked so kind and lovely. He had the most beautiful smile she had ever seen. She realized that she knew that man. She knew him so well...
- So, finally you're awake! - he said. His voice was so soft and seductive...
Annie tryed to reply but she couldn't.
- Are you ok?- the man asked - What's your name?
- Ah... Annie...
He smiled and said:
- Are you ok Annie?
Annie gigled a bit and said:
- That's one of my...favourite songs... - Annie blushed.
- Hmmm...What? - She was confusing him - What are you talking about?
- Annie are you ok?
So, Annie are you ok?
Are you ok Annie? - She sang.
- Oh! Smooth Criminal. Yeah, you're right. I like that song too. I'm sorry for my rudeness, Annie. My name is...
- Michael Jackson - Said Annie with proud - I know.


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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Wed Feb 21, 2007 12:47 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Wed Feb 21, 2007 2:22 pm

crazee

Thats reeeeaaally good!

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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Fri Feb 23, 2007 11:28 pm

Another Part of Me

Chapter Four
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Michael helped Annie to sit on the bed. She felt her heart beating faster and faster. He was so close… Michael sat on the bed, next to Annie.

- So Annie, tell me. Where are you from?
- I’m from Portugal.
- Vacation, uh?
- Yeah. I arrived yesterday. I’ll be here for three weeks.
- Are you alone? I tried to fiend your family but I couldn’t.
- I’m alone. I was in a need of some fresh air in my life. – said Annie, looking to the window.
Michael took her hand and looked to her with those beautiful eyes of his.
- Why? What happened? – he asked.
- It’s my family… They were driving me insane! Always wanting to know where I am, who am I with, what am I doing… They don’t let me do anything! I just want to live my life… - Annie felt tears in her eyes but she didn’t want to cry in front of Michael. He noticed it and hugged her.
- You know you’re family has to know about this, right? – Michael said. He was staring into her eyes. She didn’t notice she was crying.
- Michael, don’t tell them! At least not now.
- Why?
- Because… My parents… If they dream this happened and I’m with you they… - she lowered her voice – They will take me home… - she looked up deep into Michael’s eyes – And I want to be with you.
Michael smiled and gently put his and in Annie’s face.
- Ok, ok… I wont tell anything to them. And I will be here always… Precious.
Michael hugged again. Annie’s heart failed a beat. Precious… He called her Precious…
- Now tell me what happened in that alley. Did you know the guy? – Michael asked, still holding Annie’s hand.
- No, I’ve never seen that guy before. – Annie said. She told him what happened the day before, with all the details she could remember. – And the last thing I saw was your eyes.
A small tear rolled down Michael’s cheek.
- You’re safe now Annie. That guy is in jail. He was a well-known rapist, but he scared his victims so much that they never talked. The police had no proofs to capture him. But now he is in jail.
- Thanks Michael. When you showed up in that alley, you saved my life. Again.
- Wait... Again? What do you mean?
- You've been saving me over and over again. That's how and why I became your fan. I alw...
She was interrupted by a knock on the door.
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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:10 am

precious crazee crazee

This is getting heated Razz

keep it comming!!!

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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Sat Feb 24, 2007 1:00 pm

He's just being nice... Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Sat Feb 24, 2007 1:06 pm

hes bein his fine as self

pft nice..no way somethings goin on Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Sat Feb 24, 2007 2:36 pm

Of course not!
The girl is only 16, remember?

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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Sat Feb 24, 2007 2:45 pm

Another Part of Me

Chapter Five
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A girl opened the door and said:
- May I?
- Yeah, sure. - Annie replied.
- Hi. My name is Sally. As you can see, I'm a nurse. I came to see how are you.
- I'm fine, thanks.
- You are going to do some exams and if everything's alright, you can go home tomorrow morning.
- Great! - said Annie with a smile - I hate hospitals...
- Mr. Jackson, I need to talk to Annie in private. Would you please wait outside? - Sally looked to Michael with cold eyes. He didn't notice, but Annie did. He nodded, smiled to Annie and left the room.
- Annie, how old are you?
- I'm 16. Why?
- Are you alone in London?
- I asked first. Why do you want to know my age? Isn't that on my file or something?
- We wont let you go out without your parents or someone who's responsible for you.
- Well, my parents aren't here, so, yeah, I'm alone in London.
- Then someone has to be responsible for you when you leave the hospital. Do you know anyone who can do that for you?
Annie looked to the door. Michael was the only person she knew in London.
- No. No, no, no. Michael Jackson doesn't count, Annie. - said Sally with her hands on her hips.
- Why not? He's the only person I know!
- He's a *************! - Screamed Sally.
Annie felt the anger growing inside her.
- He's not a... a... That! And you know it! He saved my life damn it!
- Well, I don't trust him!
- But I do! - said Annie with tears falling from her eyes. - He saved my life more than once before. When I was attacked in that stupid alley, I was dying inside, because I wanted to go to his show next week and there were no tickets left! I always wanted to meet him and now this happened and I feel the luckiest girl in this f*ckin planet. You know why? Because Michael Jackson is a wonderful person. When I was with him, I didn't feel no pain!
Sally opened her mouth but no sound was heard on the room.
- I'm gonna talk to him about this. - said Annie - If he doesn't want to be responsible for me, then I'll call my parents.
- Your choice. - said Sally.
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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Mon Feb 26, 2007 10:18 pm

Another Part of Me

Chapter six
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16 hours and lots of exams later, Annie was back in her room. The doctor said everything was fine with her and she could go home in the next morning.

She was alone in the room. It was the first time that Michael left her, since she entered the hospital, the day before. She was so happy… She always wanted to meet Michael but she never really believed that that was possible.
She would never forget the way he looked at her, with those beautiful eyes. She would never forget the way he smiled at her, with that sexy smile. She would never forget the way he talked to her, with that sweet voice. She would never forget the way he hugged her, with those warm arms.

Annie was really tired, from the exams. She felt herself falling asleep.

*******

She was in front of the Neverland’s gates. They were opened, so she entered.
She had walked a bit when she felt someone grab her waist softly. She turned around and she saw Michael looking and smiling at her. She threw her arms around his neck and kissed his cheek.
- Where are you going? – he asked.
- Well, I was going to look for you, but I think I already found you.
- No, you’re wrong. I found you.
- No, I found YOU.
- No! I found YOU!
Michael started to tickle her and she ran away. They played for some time, having fun like two young children in a playground. They finally got tired. Annie was resting, leaning to a tree. Michael was resting too, sitting on the grass.
Suddenly, Michael got up and moved closer to Annie. She was trapped between the tree and Michael’s body. But she didn’t need to run away. She realized Michael was no longer playing. He gently put his hand on Annie’s face and softly caressed her lips with his thumb.
- You’re an amazing girl, Annie. I love you so, so much…
She felt like she was in heaven, when Michael kissed her. She had never felt that way before. Annie put her hand in Michael’s chest and felt his heart beating fast. What they were doing was wrong, but she was enjoying being with him so much that she didn’t even realized that. But Michael did and broke their kiss. He looked to her and said:
- I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have done this. I’m… I’m sorry.
Annie saw his eyes filled with tears.
She started to talk but Michael was already running away from there.
- Michael… don’t go… - she said between tears.

*******

Annie woke up. She was all sweaty and she was crying helplessly. After a while, she shook her head and said to herself:
- Annie, you gotta stop this! This is wrong! You and him will not have that kind of relationship! Do you want to get him into trouble? Stop dreaming, you silly girl!

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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Tue Feb 27, 2007 12:46 am

This is getting better and better wave crazy chicken

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PostSubject: Re: Another Part of Me   Fri Mar 02, 2007 11:48 pm

Another Part of Me

Chapter Seven
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It wasn't the first time she had dreams like this one. Usually, they were awesome but now she was feeling guilty... She was afraid that, somehow, Michael found out what she was dreaming about. He was going to be upset and she didn't want to ruin their friendship right in the beggining. And, besides, everytime she looked to Michael, she just wanted to hug him and kiss him, and she knew she couldn't do that.
She was lost in her thoughts when someone knocked at the door. It was Michael and in his hand was a beautiful flower bouquet.
- Oh Michael, they're beautiful! I love white roses! - said Annie with a big grin on her face.
- I thought you would like them. - said Michael, shrugging his shoulders and smilling - How are you feeling?
- I'm fine. A little bit tired, though.
- Haven't you slept? - Michael asked. He was playing with a lock of Annie's hair. She was affraid to do something stupid like kiss him, so, she tryed to avoid his look.
- Yes, I did. I slept a bit after the exams, but... Well, I had a dream... And I couldn't get back to sleep after I was awake...
- You had a dream? Oh, you're gonna tell me what was it about, aren't you? - She looked at him and he smiled. It wasn't easy to say no to a smile like that, but she looked down again and said:
- I can't Michael...
- Oh, come on! I'm curious now! Tell me...
- I'm sorry Michael. I... I just can't...
Michael pouted a little.
- Why?
- You'll understand, someday.
- Ok. I don't have another choice, do I? I'll have to wait for 'the day I'll understand'. - He giggled childishly and Annie had to laugh too. He looked so cute doing that! - What did the doctor said? When are you leaving this place?
- Hmmm... About that... I need to tell you something...
- What? Oh God... Is it serious?
- No, no! It's about the 'leaving this place' thing. The doctor said I'm fine and I can go home tomorrow morning. But, as I'm only 16, they wont let me get out of here without my parents OR someone responsible for me. Which means that, if something happens to me, that person will be responsible... You're the only person I know here...
- And you want me to take that responsability? Hmm... I don't know...
- I understand if you don't want to do it...
- I'm just kiddin' girl! Of course I will do it! - said Michael, putting his arm around Annie's shoulders and kissing her cheek.

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